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Noxie ([personal profile] noxie) wrote in [community profile] ficondemand2011-04-27 11:42 am

Comment Fic Meme: "Famous Firsts"


Comment Fic Meme

How it's done:

1) Comment with fandom, pairing, and a prompt:

Fandom:
Pairing:
Prompt:
The first time...
(Example: The first time Arthur saw Eames...)


- Het, slash, fem, FPF, RPF - anything goes!
- Only one prompt per comment please!
- Anonymous comments are allowed.
- Small fandoms are welcome!

2) If a certain prompt catches your eye, WRITE IT. Be sure to add 'FILLED' in the subject title. Multiple fills to the same prompt are not only allowed, but encouraged!
You can either post your fic in the comments, or as a submission to the community - or both.

3) Pimp this meme far and wide. Feel free to pimp your prompts in your journal or fannish comms, too! Remember, the more people know about it, the more likely it is that your prompt gets filled! :)

4) Profit!

Keep all content on DW for three weeks. HAVE FUN! ♥

Fandom tags will be added to this post for filled prompts only.
ldybastet: Soubi and Ritsuka from the manga Loveless (Loveless - Soubi protects)

Re: Filled - Loveless, Ritsuka/Soubi, teen

[personal profile] ldybastet 2011-04-28 06:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oooooooooh! I love this! It's brilliant!!! Thank you so much! <3

They definitely sound and feel like I am familiar with! Soubi trying to avoid orders when he's uncomfortable with them, Ritsuka bristling and getting angry with Soubi's stubbornness, Ritsuka's adorable bossiness... (I have always wondered if not Soubi would find it easier to obey orders that are meant to hurt him? Oh, poor broken boys...) The tension in the room is really nice, the little details like the tail and the ears and the shaking hands, Soubi's smile - I can see the scene in my head. :)

This was everything I hoped for and much more and better! Thank you! :)
cypher: (:D)

Re: Filled - Loveless, Ritsuka/Soubi, teen

[personal profile] cypher 2011-04-28 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, thank you, I'm so glad you liked! They're really wonderful together, and I badly wanted to be able to tease out that push-pull between them about how this "following orders" business actually works. (And yeah, I'm afraid you're right -- poor Soubi and his history of bad masters!)

♥ ♥ ♥