Oooooooooh! I love this! It's brilliant!!! Thank you so much! <3
They definitely sound and feel like I am familiar with! Soubi trying to avoid orders when he's uncomfortable with them, Ritsuka bristling and getting angry with Soubi's stubbornness, Ritsuka's adorable bossiness... (I have always wondered if not Soubi would find it easier to obey orders that are meant to hurt him? Oh, poor broken boys...) The tension in the room is really nice, the little details like the tail and the ears and the shaking hands, Soubi's smile - I can see the scene in my head. :)
This was everything I hoped for and much more and better! Thank you! :)
Re: Filled - Loveless, Ritsuka/Soubi, teen
They definitely sound and feel like I am familiar with! Soubi trying to avoid orders when he's uncomfortable with them, Ritsuka bristling and getting angry with Soubi's stubbornness, Ritsuka's adorable bossiness... (I have always wondered if not Soubi would find it easier to obey orders that are meant to hurt him? Oh, poor broken boys...) The tension in the room is really nice, the little details like the tail and the ears and the shaking hands, Soubi's smile - I can see the scene in my head. :)
This was everything I hoped for and much more and better! Thank you! :)