lap_otter: (Picard - Oh Squee Indeed)
Lap Otter ([personal profile] lap_otter) wrote in [community profile] ficondemand 2012-05-03 10:46 pm (UTC)

Oh [i]wow[/i]

I adore Jade and I adore Tavros, and I love that you kept their voices authentic without resorting to their textual quirks. They are both just so perfectly characterized, too: I loved Tavros' line: "Your self-confidence is, very attractive." I love that Jade is super self-assured, but she's not overbearing or domineering. I love that you have them TALK during sex! I just. YES.

The 'random community' button brought me here, and I am so glad that it did! I hadn't yet been able to find any Homestuck fic that I liked--true enough to the source and the characters but not a crazy multimedia experience and also maybe makes a little bit of sense once in a while. It takes a lot of talent to pull that off, and you have done so beautifully!

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